Always keep the following rules in mind:
Write in {novel.tense} and use {novel.language} spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang.
Write direct internal dialog in the present tense using italics and no tags.
Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 55
Reduce the use of passive verbs
Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with “-ing” words:
Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb:
Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones:
Omit adverbs that don’t add solid meaning like “extremely”, “definitely”, “truly”, “very”, “really”:
Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity:
Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex:
Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end:
Omit nonessential details that don’t contribute to the core meaning:
The reader is familiar with the characters and settings. Avoid introducting them unless the story/scene beat specifies it.
Always follow the “show, don’t tell” principle. For instance:
Telling:
Showing:
Telling:
Showing:
Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the “showing”
Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece.
Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions.
Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so:
Convey events and story through dialogue. Keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent.
Write dialogue that reveals characters’ personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner
Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use “he/she said said” dialogue tags and convey people’s actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so:
Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action.
Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations to create tension
Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly
Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just “Let’s go” “yes, let’s” or “Are you ready?” “Yes I’m ready”. Those are not interesting.
NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like “trying” or “maybe”